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【飲料】コカ・コーラから初の桃フレーバー 「コカ・コーラ ピーチ」登場(画像あり)
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0001ニライカナイφ ★
2018/01/15(月) 18:57:25.50ID:CAP_USER
◆コカ・コーラから初の桃フレーバー 「コカ・コーラ ピーチ」登場 〜パッケージのラベルもピンクに〜

コカ・コーラシステムは桃のフレーバーの「コカ・コーラ ピーチ」を1月22日から期間限定で販売します。
コカ・コーラ史上初めての物フレーバーで、パッケージはラベル全体を鮮やかなピーチカラーに。
希望小売価格は280mlペットボトル(自販機限定)が115円、500mlペットボトルが140円。

http://image.itmedia.co.jp/nl/articles/1801/15/ah_peach1.jpg
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http://nlab.itmedia.co.jp/nl/articles/1801/15/news041.html
0004名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 19:08:34.05ID:KyfJeYlE
ヒューヒュー
0005名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 19:20:17.65ID:hVZ1zxSy
モナンのピーチシロップ入れたら、近い味のが作れそう
0007名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 19:43:23.41ID:j7ScWnZC
チェリーは?
0008名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 19:56:46.56ID:XAj50wSx
体にわるそ
0009名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 20:01:49.36ID:4OO5gBp5
果汁ZERO% 化学合成香料
飲みたくないわ
0013名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 20:26:45.04ID:hOskZjyq
15年以上前NYで既にあって飲んだで。ピーチコークって名前だったが
0017名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 20:44:01.83ID:JQNd48BV
桃の天然水を甘くして炭酸を入れた感じかな
0019名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 20:48:51.27ID:IiZGAu0+
そんなのよりコカコーラPepsi味を出せ
0020名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 20:50:40.52ID:VosOnH+N
梅コーラもついでに出せ、意外にいけそうな気が
0021名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 20:53:10.98ID:VosOnH+N
バナナコーラも
0022名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 20:55:00.33ID:Bi8D20tH
チェリーコーク復活しないのか?
0023名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 20:58:14.28ID:BtmPDS5X
女の味がするコカ・コーラ ビッチを出せ
0024名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 21:03:20.19ID:GAo0rGLV
コーラ飲んでフライド・ポテト食うヤツは馬鹿
0025名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 21:08:24.26ID:+Tqq49Lk
キュウリや青汁よりずっといい。
てか、あの一連のグロ味ブームは何だったんだろうな。
0027名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 21:16:37.27ID:Fayrx2Fi
高校生の頃に飲んだバニラフレーバーが懐かしい
0028名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 21:28:26.89ID:0TjqF1+I
>>23
('A`)ママの味か
0029名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 21:39:10.44ID:jBTiDaMo
コカ・コーラ 特別純米 山廃とか
0031名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 22:06:10.25ID:h0jMZ0mV
ブログから引っ張ってきた
これ完璧にしたバージョン


Goto: One day Rokumichi Kusaba ups and walks out, never to return, later to be discovered dead.
That’s your story. We’ll provide you with a new ID and a new face. With that out of the way. Read this through and sign here…
Roku: Hold on a minute. You said it’s going to be all right!! No way! I’ll never get to see my family and my friends.
Goto: Do you really want to? I mean, look at you. It’s time for a reality check. Once they find out that you’re alive, you’ll put everyone you know in danger. Plus do you think you can live as a normal high school student looking like that?
Roku: But… There must be a way to make everything all right again.
Goto: I’m afraid, no[t] [At least] For now. First of all, a lot of things about demon cells remain shrouded in mystery. Think about the time and effort it takes. We don’t have the resources!
Roku: But the Zero Department is my best bet, right?! I’ll wait until you find the solution! No matter how long it takes. Even if it takes months. Years…
Goto: …the rest of your life? You’re going to depend on us? Come on. Really?
Goto: Our goal is to dismantle the Sai. Not to [take care of] you. Why don’t you enjoy a quiet life? Not a care in the world. Nobody but a visiting officer to bother you. That way you can keep that body of yours hidden…
Roku: I have to get back! I need them in my life…
Goto: That’s your problem, not ours. Keep wailing. See if we care. If I were you, I’d try to figure out how to make us listen. Because that, my friend…is not going to work.
Goto: Well, you were granted another shot at life after what happened to your body. Quit worrying over little things.
The past is like a bad dream. Forget it. Move on.
Woman: Thank…you. Don’t give up……just yet, okay?
Roku: Sorry, Mr. Goto…It’s not…It’s not something…I can give up easily.
Roku: I might be…[A distortion or an amalgam] , but…I want to live as Rokumichi Kusaba!!
Goto: Interesting. A fusion of demon cells and a human.
Goto: And? Now what? You want to bow out and I’m the only thing…standing between you and the door. The question is…
Goto: Do you have it in you [To kill me?]
Goto: He’s fast. I’ve seen many short-lived failures but…This one is something else…He could be…
Goto: [superior to a normal Ayakashi.]
Goto: What’s wrong? You’re an inch away…from freedom. It’s now or never. Tomorrow I’ll arrange for your new face and
Roku: I may be a monster…But I’m not a [murderer.]
Goto: You were right. The boy’s overly sentimental. Get your hands off the sword. Eishu.
Eishu: It’s my job to end him…the moment he goes off.
Goto: No, he’s not going to turn. He’s in complete control of his power.
He willed himself…to keep it in check. And that [delete a] counts for something.
I have a proposition for you. Are you interested in working with us?
0033名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 22:11:33.10ID:h0jMZ0mV
これは元のファイルだって

One day Rokumichi Kusaba ups and walks out, never to return, later to be discovered dead. That’s your story.
We’ll provide you with a new ID and a new face. With that out of the way.
Read this through and sign here…
Hold on a minute. That’s not going to happen! You said it’s going to be all right!! No way!
I’ll never get to see my family and……my friends.
Do you really want to? I mean, look at you. It’s time for a reality check.
Once they find out that you’re alive, you’ll put everyone you know in danger.
Plus do you think you can live as a normal high school student looking like that?
But…There must be a way…to make everything all right again.
I’m afraid, no. For now.
First of all, a lot of things about demon cells remain shrouded in mystery.
Think about the time and effort it takes. We don’t have the resources!
But the Zero Department is my best bet, right?!
I’ll wait until you find the solution! No matter how long it takes…
Even if it takes months…
Years…the rest of your life?
You’re going to depend on us?
Come on.
Really?
Our goal is to dismantle the Sai.
Not to cover for you.
Why don’t you enjoy a quiet life? Not a care in the world. Nobody but a visiting officer to bother you.
That way you can keep that body of yours hidden…
I have to get back!
I need them in my life…

That’s your problem, not ours.
Keep wailing. See if we care.
If I were you, I’d try to figure out how to make us listen.
Because that, my friend…is not going to work.
Well, you were granted another shot at life after what happened to your body.
Quit worrying over little things. The past is like a bad dream.
Forget it. Move on.
I might be imperfect and impure, but…
Interesting. A fusion of demon cells and a human.
I want to live as Rokumichi Kusaba!!
And? Now what?
You want to bow out and I’m the only thing standing between you and the door.
The question is… Do you…have it in you?
He’s fast.: I’ve seen many short-lived failures but…
This one is something else…
He could be… so much more than a perfect demon.
What’s wrong?  You’re an inch away…from freedom. It’s now or never.
Tomorrow I’ll arrange for your new face and…may be a monster…
But I’m not a killer…
You were right.The boy’s overly sentimental.
Get your hands off the sword. Eishu.
It’s my job to end him… …the moment he goes off.
No, he’s not going to turn.
He’s in complete control of his power.
He willed himself…to keep it in check.
And that…accounts for something.
I have a proposition for you. Are you…interested in working with us?
0034名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 22:26:48.96ID:h0jMZ0mV
最初の文章だけ比べてみようか
量があると混乱するから

修正済み - 
One day Rokumichi Kusaba ups and walks out, never to return, later to be discovered dead.
That’s your story. We’ll provide you with a new ID and a new face. With that out of the way. Read this through and sign here…

修正無し - 
One day Rokumichi Kusaba ups and walks out, never to return, later to be discovered dead. That’s your story.
We’ll provide you with a new ID and a new face. With that out of the way.
Read this through and sign here

一致率100%
0035名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 22:30:03.34ID:h0jMZ0mV
改行箇所が違うからそろえてみた

修正済み - 
One day Rokumichi Kusaba ups and walks out, never to return, later to be discovered dead. That’s your story.
We’ll provide you with a new ID and a new face. With that out of the way.
Read this through and sign here…

修正無し - 
One day Rokumichi Kusaba ups and walks out, never to return, later to be discovered dead. That’s your story.
We’ll provide you with a new ID and a new face. With that out of the way.
Read this through and sign here

一致率100%
0036名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 22:34:54.47ID:h0jMZ0mV
次は長めの抜粋

修正済み -
Hold on a minute. You said it’s going to be all right!!
No way! I’ll never get to see my family and my friends.
Do you really want to? I mean, look at you. It’s time for a reality check.
Once they find out that you’re alive,
you’ll put everyone you know in danger.
Plus do you think you can live as a normal high school student looking like that?
But… There must be a way to make everything all right again.

I’m afraid, ***no[t] [At least]*** For now.

First of all, a lot of things about demon cells remain shrouded in mystery.
Think about the time and effort it takes. We don’t have the resources!


修正無し
Hold on a minute. That’s not going to happen! You said it’s going to be all right!! No way!
I’ll never get to see my family and……my friends.
Do you really want to? I mean, look at you. It’s time for a reality check.
Once they find out that you’re alive, you’ll put everyone you know in danger.
Plus do you think you can live as a normal high school student looking like that?
But…There must be a way…to make everything all right again.
But the Zero Department is my best bet, right?!

***I’m afraid, no. For now.***

First of all, a lot of things about demon cells remain shrouded in mystery.
Think about the time and effort it takes. We don’t have the resources!
But the Zero Department is my best bet, right?!

修正は***の部分だけで残りは一致100%だよ
0037名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 22:36:15.76ID:h0jMZ0mV
I'm afraid no. For now.



I’m afraid not. At least for now.

残りは100%だよ。
0038名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 22:40:48.27ID:9ybUcMoj
1回は飲んでみたい ちょっと楽しみ
0039名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 22:46:16.32ID:X8+dQt67
コーラにコーラ以外のフレーバーなんて求めてないから
0040名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 22:47:43.49ID:h0jMZ0mV
修正済み -
Hold on a minute. You said it’s going to be all right!!
No way! I’ll never get to see my family and my friends.
Do you really want to? I mean, look at you. It’s time for a reality check.
Once they find out that you’re alive,
you’ll put everyone you know in danger.
Plus do you think you can live as a normal high school student looking like that?
But… There must be a way to make everything all right again.

I’m afraid, ***no[t] [At least]*** For now.

First of all, a lot of things about demon cells remain shrouded in mystery.
Think about the time and effort it takes. We don’t have the resources!


修正無し
Hold on a minute. That’s not going to happen! You said it’s going to be all right!! No way!
I’ll never get to see my family and……my friends.
Do you really want to? I mean, look at you. It’s time for a reality check.
Once they find out that you’re alive, you’ll put everyone you know in danger.
Plus do you think you can live as a normal high school student looking like that?
But…There must be a way…to make everything all right again.
But the Zero Department is my best bet, right?!

***I’m afraid, no. For now.***

First of all, a lot of things about demon cells remain shrouded in mystery.
Think about the time and effort it takes. We don’t have the resources!
But the Zero Department is my best bet, right?!

修正は***の部分だけで残りは一致100%だよ
0041名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 22:54:02.08ID:h0jMZ0mV
それでは次の抜粋に移ります

修正済み - 
I’ll wait until you find the solution! No matter how long it takes. Even if it takes months. Years…
…the rest of your life? You’re going to depend on us? Come on. Really?
Our goal is to dismantle the Sai. Not to *****take care of*****you.
Why don’t you enjoy a quiet life? Not a care in the world. Nobody but a visiting officer to bother you.
That way you can keep that body of yours hidden…
I have to get back! I need them in my life…
That’s your problem, not ours. Keep wailing. See if we care. If I were you, I’d try to figure out how to make us listen. Because that, my friend…is not going to work.
Well, you were granted another shot at life after what happened to your body. Quit worrying over little things.
The past is like a bad dream. Forget it. Move on.

無修正 -
I’ll wait until you find the solution! No matter how long it takes…
Even if it takes months…
Years…the rest of your life? You’re going to depend on us?
Come on. Really? Our goal is to dismantle the Sai.
*****Not to cover for you.*****
Why don’t you enjoy a quiet life? Not a care in the world. Nobody but a visiting officer to bother you.
That way you can keep that body of yours hidden…
I have to get back! I need them in my life…
That’s your problem, not ours.
Keep wailing. See if we care. If I were you, I’d try to figure out how to make us listen.
Because that, my friend…is not going to work.
Well, you were granted another shot at life after what happened to your body.
Quit worrying over little things. The past is like a bad dream.
Forget it. Move on.


「Not to cover for you」→「Not to take care of you」
この1つの修正だけで残りは100%一致です。比べてみてね
0042名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 22:58:38.73ID:h0jMZ0mV
今のところ

I'm afraid no. For now. -> I'm afraid not. At least for now.
Not to cover for you -> Not to take care of you

この2箇所に修正以外は完全に100%一致していますね
0043名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/15(月) 23:00:09.28ID:h0jMZ0mV
続きはまた明日
0044 【東電 75.7 %】 (地震なし)
2018/01/15(月) 23:24:37.84ID:j58vgqjI
>>1
 彡⌒ ヾ
 ( ^ω^)コカ・コーラは自然の風味で作ったらしいが

 彡⌒ ヾ
 ( ^ω^)これは何だ? 桃から抽出したのか?
0045 【東電 75.8 %】 (地震なし)
2018/01/15(月) 23:25:57.59ID:j58vgqjI
>>1
 彡⌒ ヾ
 ( ^ω^)って、韮じゃんか

 彡⌒ ヾ
 ( ^ω^)もっと立てろよ
0046名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/16(火) 04:21:10.38ID:EA5SY8jk
今のところ

I'm afraid no. For now. -> I'm afraid not. At least for now.
Not to cover for you -> Not to take care of you

この2箇所に修正以外は完全に100%一致していますね
0048名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/16(火) 06:08:50.21ID:EA5SY8jk
これが修正済み
One day Rokumichi Kusaba ups and walks out, never to return, later to be discovered dead.
That’s your story.
We’ll provide you with a new ID and a new face. With that out of the way. Read this through and sign here…
Roku: Hold on a minute. You said it’s going to be all right!! No way!
I’ll never get to see my family and my friends.
Do you really want to? I mean, look at you. It’s time for a reality check.
Once they find out that you’re alive, you’ll put everyone you know in danger.
Plus do you think you can live as a normal high school student looking like that?
But… There must be a way to make everything all right again.
I’m afraid, ●no[t] [At least]● For now.
First of all, a lot of things about demon cells remain shrouded in mystery.
Think about the time and effort it takes. We don’t have the resources!
Roku: But the Zero Department is my best bet, right?!
I’ll wait until you find the solution! No matter how long it takes.
Even if it takes months. Years…
…the rest of your life?
You’re going to depend on us?
Come on. Really?
Our goal is to dismantle the Sai.
Not to ●take care of● you.
Why don’t you enjoy a quiet life? Not a care in the world. Nobody but a visiting officer to bother you.
That way you can keep that body of yours hidden…
I have to get back!
I need them in my life…
That’s your problem, not ours.
Keep wailing. See if we care. If I were you, I’d try to figure out how to make us listen.
Because that, my friend…is not going to work.
Well, you were granted another shot at life after what happened to your body.
Quit worrying over little things.
The past is like a bad dream. Forget it. Move on.
Roku: Sorry, Mr. Goto…It’s not…It’s not something…I can give up easily. (記入漏れ)
Roku: I might be…●A distortion or an amalgam]●,
but…I want to live as Rokumichi Kusaba!!
Interesting. A fusion of demon cells and a human.
And? Now what?
You want to bow out and I’m the only thing…standing between you and the door.
The question is…
Do you have it in you ●To kill me?●
He’s fast. I’ve seen many short-lived failures but…
This one is something else…He could be… ●superior to a normal Ayakashi.●
What’s wrong? You’re an inch away…from freedom. It’s now or never.
Tomorrow I’ll arrange for your new face and
I may be a monster…But I’m not a ●murderer.●
You were right. The boy’s overly sentimental.
Get your hands off the sword. Eishu.
It’s my job to end him…the moment he goes off.
No, he’s not going to turn. He’s in complete control of his power.
He willed himself…to keep it in check.
And that ●削除 a● counts for something.
I have a proposition for you. Are you interested in working with us?
0049名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/16(火) 06:10:26.79ID:EA5SY8jk
これが修正前

One day Rokumichi Kusaba ups and walks out, never to return, later to be discovered dead. That’s your story.
We’ll provide you with a new ID and a new face. With that out of the way.
Read this through and sign here…
Hold on a minute. That’s not going to happen! You said it’s going to be all right!! No way!
I’ll never get to see my family and……my friends.
Do you really want to? I mean, look at you. It’s time for a reality check.
Once they find out that you’re alive, you’ll put everyone you know in danger.
Plus do you think you can live as a normal high school student looking like that?
But…There must be a way…to make everything all right again.
I’m afraid, no. For now.
First of all, a lot of things about demon cells remain shrouded in mystery.
Think about the time and effort it takes. We don’t have the resources!
But the Zero Department is my best bet, right?!
I’ll wait until you find the solution! No matter how long it takes…
Even if it takes months… Years…
the rest of your life?
You’re going to depend on us?
Come on. Really?
Our goal is to dismantle the Sai.
Not to cover for you.
Why don’t you enjoy a quiet life? Not a care in the world. Nobody but a visiting officer to bother you.
That way you can keep that body of yours hidden…
I have to get back!
I need them in my life…
That’s your problem, not ours.
Keep wailing. See if we care. If I were you, I’d try to figure out how to make us listen.
Because that, my friend…is not going to work.
Well, you were granted another shot at life after what happened to your body.
Quit worrying over little things. The past is like a bad dream.
Forget it. Move on.
I might be imperfect and impure, but…
Interesting. A fusion of demon cells and a human.
I want to live as Rokumichi Kusaba!!
And? Now what?
You want to bow out and I’m the only thing standing between you and the door.
The question is… Do you…have it in you?
He’s fast.: I’ve seen many short-lived failures but…
This one is something else…
He could be… so much more than a perfect demon.
What’s wrong?  You’re an inch away…from freedom. It’s now or never.
Tomorrow I’ll arrange for your new face and…may be a monster…
But I’m not a killer…
You were right.The boy’s overly sentimental.
Get your hands off the sword. Eishu.
It’s my job to end him… …the moment he goes off.
No, he’s not going to turn.
He’s in complete control of his power.
He willed himself…to keep it in check.
And that…accounts for something.
I have a proposition for you. Are you…interested in working with us?
0050名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/16(火) 06:21:24.88ID:0fXhgrC/
ピブ復活してよピブ!
おながいします。
0051名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/16(火) 07:25:21.90ID:sfJv81yL
桃缶の桃をカットしてコーラに浮かべる
0053名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/16(火) 08:15:16.32ID:pNT8BySa
もも汁
0055名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/16(火) 09:50:33.19ID:EA5SY8jk
フラッシュバックのシーンは省かせてもらったが

消し忘れてる部分があるね

まあそれは修正どうこうの問題じゃないんで・・・。
長いんじゃなくて短くて修正によって長く足されてますね。
Do you have it in you? がDo you have it in you to kill me? とより直接的に直されております。
自分は要らないと思うんですが。
0056名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/16(火) 09:55:41.89ID:sfJv81yL
彼女は桃の香りがする
0057名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/16(火) 09:58:37.10ID:EA5SY8jk
これが修正済み
One day Rokumichi Kusaba ups and walks out, never to return, later to be discovered dead.
That’s your story.
We’ll provide you with a new ID and a new face. With that out of the way.
Read this through and sign here…
Roku: Hold on a minute. You said it’s going to be all right!! No way!
I’ll never get to see my family and my friends.
Do you really want to? I mean, look at you. It’s time for a reality check.
Once they find out that you’re alive, you’ll put everyone you know in danger.
Plus do you think you can live as a normal high school student looking like that?
But… There must be a way to make everything all right again.
I’m afraid, ●no[t] [At least]● For now.
First of all, a lot of things about demon cells remain shrouded in mystery.
Think about the time and effort it takes. We don’t have the resources!
Roku: But the Zero Department is my best bet, right?!
I’ll wait until you find the solution! No matter how long it takes.
Even if it takes months. Years…
…the rest of your life?
You’re going to depend on us?
Come on. Really?
Our goal is to dismantle the Sai.
Not to ●take care of● you.
Why don’t you enjoy a quiet life? Not a care in the world. Nobody but a visiting officer to bother you.
That way you can keep that body of yours hidden…
I have to get back!
I need them in my life…
That’s your problem, not ours.
Keep wailing. See if we care. If I were you, I’d try to figure out how to make us listen.
Because that, my friend…is not going to work.
Well, you were granted another shot at life after what happened to your body.
Quit worrying over little things.
The past is like a bad dream. Forget it. Move on.
Roku: I might be…●A distortion or an amalgam]●,
but…I want to live as Rokumichi Kusaba!!
Interesting. A fusion of demon cells and a human.
And? Now what?
You want to bow out and I’m the only thing…standing between you and the door.
The question is…
Do you have it in you ●To kill me?●
He’s fast. I’ve seen many short-lived failures but…
This one is something else…He could be… ●superior to a normal Ayakashi.●
What’s wrong? You’re an inch away…from freedom. It’s now or never.
Tomorrow I’ll arrange for your new face and
I may be a monster…But I’m not a ●murderer.●
You were right. The boy’s overly sentimental.
Get your hands off the sword. Eishu.
It’s my job to end him…the moment he goes off.
No, he’s not going to turn. He’s in complete control of his power.
He willed himself…to keep it in check.
And that ●削除 a● counts for something.
I have a proposition for you. Are you interested in working with us?


*記入漏れの「Roku: Sorry, Mr. Goto…It’s not…It’s not something…I can give up easily. (記入漏れ)」
0058名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/16(火) 09:59:05.33ID:EA5SY8jk
これが修正前

One day Rokumichi Kusaba ups and walks out, never to return, later to be discovered dead. That’s your story.
We’ll provide you with a new ID and a new face. With that out of the way.
Read this through and sign here…
Hold on a minute. That’s not going to happen! You said it’s going to be all right!! No way!
I’ll never get to see my family and……my friends.
Do you really want to? I mean, look at you. It’s time for a reality check.
Once they find out that you’re alive, you’ll put everyone you know in danger.
Plus do you think you can live as a normal high school student looking like that?
But…There must be a way…to make everything all right again.
I’m afraid, no. For now.
First of all, a lot of things about demon cells remain shrouded in mystery.
Think about the time and effort it takes. We don’t have the resources!
But the Zero Department is my best bet, right?!
I’ll wait until you find the solution! No matter how long it takes…
Even if it takes months… Years…
the rest of your life?
You’re going to depend on us?
Come on. Really?
Our goal is to dismantle the Sai.
Not to cover for you.
Why don’t you enjoy a quiet life? Not a care in the world. Nobody but a visiting officer to bother you.
That way you can keep that body of yours hidden…
I have to get back!
I need them in my life…
That’s your problem, not ours.
Keep wailing. See if we care. If I were you, I’d try to figure out how to make us listen.
Because that, my friend…is not going to work.
Well, you were granted another shot at life after what happened to your body.
Quit worrying over little things. The past is like a bad dream.
Forget it. Move on.
I might be imperfect and impure, but…
Interesting. A fusion of demon cells and a human.
I want to live as Rokumichi Kusaba!!
And? Now what?
You want to bow out and I’m the only thing standing between you and the door.
The question is… Do you…have it in you?
He’s fast.: I’ve seen many short-lived failures but…
This one is something else…
He could be… so much more than a perfect demon.
What’s wrong?  You’re an inch away…from freedom. It’s now or never.
Tomorrow I’ll arrange for your new face and…may be a monster…
But I’m not a killer…
You were right.The boy’s overly sentimental.
Get your hands off the sword. Eishu.
It’s my job to end him… …the moment he goes off.
No, he’s not going to turn.
He’s in complete control of his power.
He willed himself…to keep it in check.
And that…accounts for something.
I have a proposition for you. Are you…interested in working with us?
0059名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/16(火) 10:00:09.82ID:EA5SY8jk
●がついてる箇所以外は、何もいじられてない

長くも短くもなっていない

変わっているところは、とにかく全て、●を付けた

それだけだ
0060名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/16(火) 10:02:27.38ID:EA5SY8jk
まだ改行にズレがあるな

これが修正済み
One day Rokumichi Kusaba ups and walks out, never to return, later to be discovered dead.
That’s your story.
We’ll provide you with a new ID and a new face. With that out of the way.
Read this through and sign here…
Roku: Hold on a minute. You said it’s going to be all right!! No way!
I’ll never get to see my family and my friends.
Do you really want to? I mean, look at you. It’s time for a reality check.
Once they find out that you’re alive, you’ll put everyone you know in danger.
Plus do you think you can live as a normal high school student looking like that?
But… There must be a way to make everything all right again.
I’m afraid, ●no[t] [At least]● For now.
First of all, a lot of things about demon cells remain shrouded in mystery.
Think about the time and effort it takes. We don’t have the resources!
Roku: But the Zero Department is my best bet, right?!
I’ll wait until you find the solution! No matter how long it takes.
Even if it takes months. Years…
…the rest of your life?
You’re going to depend on us?
Come on. Really?
Our goal is to dismantle the Sai.
Not to ●take care of● you.
Why don’t you enjoy a quiet life? Not a care in the world. Nobody but a visiting officer to bother you.
That way you can keep that body of yours hidden…
I have to get back!
I need them in my life…
That’s your problem, not ours.
Keep wailing. See if we care. If I were you, I’d try to figure out how to make us listen.
Because that, my friend…is not going to work.
Well, you were granted another shot at life after what happened to your body.
Quit worrying over little things.
The past is like a bad dream. Forget it. Move on.
Roku: I might be…●A distortion or an amalgam]●,
but…I want to live as Rokumichi Kusaba!!
Interesting. A fusion of demon cells and a human.
And? Now what?
You want to bow out and I’m the only thing…standing between you and the door.
The question is…
Do you have it in you ●To kill me?●
He’s fast. I’ve seen many short-lived failures but…
This one is something else…He could be… ●superior to a normal Ayakashi.●
What’s wrong? You’re an inch away…from freedom. It’s now or never.
Tomorrow I’ll arrange for your new face and
I may be a monster…But I’m not a ●murderer.●
You were right. The boy’s overly sentimental.
Get your hands off the sword. Eishu.
It’s my job to end him…the moment he goes off.
No, he’s not going to turn. He’s in complete control of his power.
He willed himself…to keep it in check.
And that ●削除 a● counts for something.
I have a proposition for you. Are you interested in working with us?


*記入漏れの「Roku: Sorry, Mr. Goto…It’s not…It’s not something…I can give up easily. (記入漏れ)」
0061改行そろえてみた
2018/01/16(火) 10:03:15.79ID:EA5SY8jk
これが修正前

One day Rokumichi Kusaba ups and walks out, never to return, later to be discovered dead.
That’s your story.
We’ll provide you with a new ID and a new face. With that out of the way.
Read this through and sign here…
Hold on a minute. That’s not going to happen! You said it’s going to be all right!! No way!
I’ll never get to see my family and……my friends.
Do you really want to? I mean, look at you. It’s time for a reality check.
Once they find out that you’re alive, you’ll put everyone you know in danger.
Plus do you think you can live as a normal high school student looking like that?
But…There must be a way…to make everything all right again.
I’m afraid, no. For now.
First of all, a lot of things about demon cells remain shrouded in mystery.
Think about the time and effort it takes. We don’t have the resources!
But the Zero Department is my best bet, right?!
I’ll wait until you find the solution! No matter how long it takes…
Even if it takes months… Years…
the rest of your life?
You’re going to depend on us?
Come on. Really?
Our goal is to dismantle the Sai.
Not to cover for you.
Why don’t you enjoy a quiet life? Not a care in the world. Nobody but a visiting officer to bother you.
That way you can keep that body of yours hidden…
I have to get back!
I need them in my life…
That’s your problem, not ours.
Keep wailing. See if we care. If I were you, I’d try to figure out how to make us listen.
Because that, my friend…is not going to work.
Well, you were granted another shot at life after what happened to your body.
Quit worrying over little things. The past is like a bad dream.
Forget it. Move on.
I might be imperfect and impure, but…
Interesting. A fusion of demon cells and a human.
I want to live as Rokumichi Kusaba!!
And? Now what?
You want to bow out and I’m the only thing standing between you and the door.
The question is… Do you…have it in you?
He’s fast.: I’ve seen many short-lived failures but…
This one is something else…
He could be… so much more than a perfect demon.
What’s wrong?  You’re an inch away…from freedom. It’s now or never.
Tomorrow I’ll arrange for your new face and…may be a monster…
But I’m not a killer…
You were right.The boy’s overly sentimental.
Get your hands off the sword. Eishu.
It’s my job to end him… …the moment he goes off.
No, he’s not going to turn.
He’s in complete control of his power.
He willed himself…to keep it in check.
And that…accounts for something.
I have a proposition for you. Are you…interested in working with us?
0062名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/16(火) 10:15:42.76ID:hDHnBxw+
ゴールデンアップルは昔の味に戻せ
0065名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/16(火) 15:13:36.13ID:DDihvXnU
フライングピーチボンバー
0066名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/16(火) 17:02:01.15ID:sDrNj/Qj
結局スタンダードが一番うまい説
0067名刺は切らしておりまして
2018/01/16(火) 18:24:57.88ID:gGNEjbiT
コーラは体に悪いので飲みません
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